This is a story about a 13 yrs old boy escaping America. Hi, my name is Carlos.
One time I was playing FORTNITE and I heard an explosion. I thought it was the game so I carried on. Then a guy came up to my bedroom window and aimed with his assault rifle at me so I threw my broken PS4 controller at him. I ran to the kitchen where my parents were then I saw a guy knock at the door with his gun so I told mum and dad to get to my room then grabbed the dog. “Mum, Dad there's a trap door under my cabinet which leads to the neighbors house.“
We crawled to the neighbors and told her to come with us but she said she’ll go on her own so I said good luck and she said the same thing.So we started our long journey to get to the harbour. We went through a jungle to get to the harbour. Then we finally got to the harbour we were just in time so we got on the boat. 10 hours later we got to NZ so that's my story.
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